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IntoTheRain
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0 posted 2007-03-04 05:39 AM


Caught between earth and sky
Pinned empty to the wall
Witness to the birth
Sick, I want to rise
For now back to broken ground

The vacant static buzzing
Sound of hollow voices
They rise in chorus and
Bind you in chains
Reeling as her call
Crumbles a pleading kiss

Suddenly I realize
That if I stepped out of my body I would break
Into blossom

Two months to the day
A dead feeling
And blank white snow
Like an empty canvas


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1 posted 2007-03-04 09:41 AM


Rob~

'Suddenly I realize
That if I stepped out of my body I would break
Into blossom'


I felt the cimmerian thoughts~

I enjoyed this read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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2 posted 2007-03-04 11:33 AM


Hi

"That if I stepped out of my body I would break
Into blossom"

Only a poet can do that.     I've not said welcome yet, so welcome to Pip!

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