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Open Poetry #40

Walking Amongst Angels

James McInerney
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 83

0 posted 2007-03-03 05:31 PM

WALKING AMONGST ANGELS

My arm outstretched,
And with a guiding hand,
To touch the air,
To breathe the land,
The warmth of the sun,
Bright coloured raybeams bouncing off my face,
Solitude in my mind has always been a place,
Reality the experience of existence,
Feelings displayed to look but not to touch,
Emotions so clear you can read them like a book,
Do you see my inner lining?
It is woven with a twist,
And like all of those before you,
I now no longer exist.
Like A lone heart in an open minefield,
Quickly washing the tears away,
The truth becomes a vision,
So bright and full of promise in a way,
And with my feathered wings, made of silk and of gold,
I am floating high above you,
Do you try and grab hold?
My breathing so shallow,
One heartbeat at a time,
My body so loose,
My pulse barely in line,
Is this heaven?,
Or the end of mankind?,
A family to leave,
But always in my mind.
And if anyone should ask,
Or enquire of me,
Just tell them the story,
Of how it all went,
That I'm walking amongst angels,
And that I was heaven sent.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-03-03 07:41 PM

Enjoyed...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-03-04 07:46 AM

I enjoyed this too

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2007-03-04 09:30 AM

Like A lone heart in an open minefield,
Quickly washing the tears away,
The truth becomes a vision,
So bright and full of promise in a way,
And with my feathered wings, made of silk and of gold,

~*~

Strength can fly
just like this...

Enjoyed, James.

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

4 posted 2007-03-05 06:36 PM

Images for your blog

Feelings displayed to look but not to touch,
Emotions so clear you can read them like a book,
Do you see my inner lining?
It is woven with a twist

My favorite part.

I really enjoyed this one. Perfectly expressed. Take care, JulieAnn

~~~kingsangel~~~

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