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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2007-03-02 12:46 PM



I can feel you
lying there,

yes, right there,
along the curves
of          every breath drawn;

your essence
fills me with
the question    burning
of what is this?

This scent,
this sense
of knowing
what lies behind
those eyes
in soul touch   lingering
along the curves

of my heart.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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steavenr
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1 posted 2007-03-02 01:00 PM


beautiful title, lovely poem
Janette
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2 posted 2007-03-02 01:22 PM


Fabulous offering here, it tingled my senses.

Enjoyed!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2007-03-02 02:22 PM


Steven and Janette, thank you both so much. Happy Friday.
The Lady
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4 posted 2007-03-02 10:38 PM




"in soul touch   lingering
along the curves

of my heart'

well you knew those lines
would grab me
gentle Donna

hugs to you


passing shadows
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5 posted 2007-03-03 03:52 AM


this is beautiful
Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2007-03-06 09:06 AM


Kate, Dixie, thank you both so much for resting your eyes here for a moment. Hugs to you both.
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