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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
trees suspended by tendrils of will sky touching sky like tapestries of linens laid in linings of gold, traced on images of silver sun sets on pallored pillows of ivory, stained with the tears of a passing day tears that hallow all of life’s journeys resting in the harbor of summer winds the soul sings for lack of yearning songs the restless only know written by the bards of the lonely to capture the hearts of the free away, oh sirens of sentient dreams allaying the fears of repression-- away, oh freedom’s refrain feigning the arrival of spring trees suspended by tendrils of will scratching the surfaces of desire |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Standing tall and strong...no matter what the weather of time. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"songs the restless only know" I adored the colors you weaved through this piece, and especially the perception of "sentient dreams." (great word there) "sky touching sky like tapestries of linens" Which inspires me to say- linen is natural light shades of pale caressed with panting breaths of color to mark a degree of difference Fabulous read steavenr. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
So lovely. You really are a beautiful writer. A |
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