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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2007-06-02 02:48 PM


i’ve written her so many poems to get her to appreciate my Vince-Sanity

does she store them in her “vanity”?

                       do I bore her with my sanity?

at her core am I her manatee?

is it décor that Christianity teaches that all things are possible

when my popcicle thinks my humanity

                                   is missing?


                                                                                 love,

                                                                                 howard









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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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since 2001-06-02
Posts 190

1 posted 2007-06-02 03:56 PM


An interesting write!

Is that a Chuck Berry flavored popsicle?

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-06-03 06:02 AM


Howard.. love your writing as always!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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