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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2007-03-01 07:24 AM

drama elegant and complicated

what mocks faith in humanity?
embodies the deepest mind?
challenges an equivalence inherently
what
winter knows far in advance…

the punch line, perhaps a burden
of weak and brutal men
unfailing honesty, supremely calls
to a dictatorship of maintenance

the impossible
choice
allows graciousness
to be more poignant
then one root of
a villain's despise
vulnerable people
fed grotesque cynicism
by some tall
lovely actress
who implies....
a humanistic right where
exposition
aspires like a prostitute
all dressed up
eavesdropping on
zeals of hunger
& poverty be their muse
spreading self gratification
like the strong jaw
of curious evolution

malignant free will
grows like dictatorships
flushed with
a healthy rosy color
bloodthirsty to the test

does humanity
prove cause for hope?
once we glimpse
inside the chaos?

hormones of daydreams
swirl poetically evoked
more courageous & optimistic
with romantic temperament
like the first robin of spring

delicate rhythm of offering
so much in return
a story
magically familiar
beautifully realized
by a few good men

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2007-03-01 08:18 AM

LeeJ
You said a mouth full here. LOL

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

2 posted 2007-03-01 09:43 AM

"unfailing honesty, supremely calls
to a dictatorship of maintenance"

Oh! This is rich and I often think the same way when viewing actors spouting off on some issue for when in fact they are only "spreading self gratification."

"hormones of daydreams"
Wow! I love this "delicate rhythm of offering."

Excellent write!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2007-03-01 11:56 AM

"lovely actress
who implies....
a humanistic right where
exposition
aspires like a prostitute
all dressed up
eavesdropping on
zeals of hunger
& poverty be their muse
spreading self gratification
like the strong jaw
of curious evolution"

Lee J,
You said it all in this verse.
I love the whole write, but this one verse shouts!

PS... stay away from closed doors.
LUV-YA..

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

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