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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. No one Not a child Looks all that good On a drab gray winter day At the train station Even the young Men and women Are struggling With the cold Or perhaps It has more to do With life no longer being so Undetermined in its hours That will now grow to years Almost without trace or residue Covered over by the snow . |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah John, it seems like you need some sunshine sent your way! enjoyed this  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
are we in Wyoming, with all of its blue skies or in Illinois, where the gray seems to subsist over factories and dungie gaming places; are we where horned beings still leap in game, or where dreams find a sill in summer's light? ~*~ John, I do so enjoy when you inspire thought. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I agree with Sunshine, you do inspire thought. then the snow will melt outlining a trail to encouraged hope of fruitful friendships that ask for nothing but safe well wishes Enjoyed the reads ... best wishes Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
powerful write...brings me a feeling of sadness for some reason |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
your mastery of words, always brings deep emotion enjoyed! |
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