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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state

0 posted 2007-02-28 08:36 AM


Dispersed
On the way out
heart-shaped
national love
wants to sit
next to desert queen
without sincere interests
they love blond
princesses
sprawled on beaches
shells strewn
no care in what lies
where nations exist
sandals laid beside
sandy crusted towels
their own eliminated
sent off to conquer
grains of sand
but they like
the feel of
crushed shells
seaweed salt
therapeutic
heart shaped
love that lingers
then evaporates
even admire salty horizons
toted trinket boards, full
straped to beachcomber
on the way out
road trip
but on encrusted
beaches
it's dispersed
into hot winds.
They call it cleansing
we know better.




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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-02-28 10:12 AM


whew, some very heavy metal...
outstanding!

Janette
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Chicagoland for now
2 posted 2007-02-28 10:47 PM


I have observed this, too.

Interesting write with such varied visuals ... WOW!

Enjoyed the brain jolt.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2007-02-28 11:56 PM


always good to read you Martin
wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08
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on the way to next world
4 posted 2007-03-02 03:11 PM


pleasure to give some inside into how certain popular visions of a country, of what qualifies a nation is being unravelled..


wordwizard
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on the way to next world
5 posted 2007-03-02 03:12 PM


pleasure to give some inside into how certain popular visions of a country, of what qualifies a nation is being unravelled..


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