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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2007-02-28 08:08 AM


Repost:


My other Half

You are to me the fairest fair
The essence of my hearts ensnare
Forever’s piece of magic mist
Sealed by kiss that locked the gist

You are the holder of my heart
That wisp of kiss that was the start
I know the moment of this light
That burned its way through mind and sight

You are the sauce the course and force
The very essence of the source
You are my love the meaning of
The goal and soul of Eden’s love

You are the other part of me
That gave me wings and set me free
You are Pandora of the box
That saves me from this paradox

You are the distaff of my goal
The other half completes my soul


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-02-28 08:24 AM


You are the sauce the course and force
The very essence of the source
You are my love the meaning of
The goal and soul of Eden’s love

anima/animus in the flesh

wonderful story and so so true

Hello Sy, good to see ya


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2007-02-28 08:57 AM


LeeJ
Thank you love and the top of the morning to ya.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2007-02-28 09:00 AM


"You are the holder of my heart
That wisp of kiss that was the start
I know the moment of this light
That burned its way through mind and sight"

How beautiful this is Sy!
It's so good to awaken and read of such a deep love.
& , Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2007-02-28 09:10 AM


Nancy
Thank you sweetie, :;loveya: too.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2007-02-28 11:18 AM


gorgeous!
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2007-02-28 11:51 AM


passing  
Thank you dear.

SmartChick
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7 posted 2007-02-28 02:23 PM


Awwww Seymour, you are so sweet. This is a beautiful poem for your other half. I bet she will treasure this forever.
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2007-02-28 02:52 PM


SmartChick
WEll I hope so we've been together almost 65yrs. LOL

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9 posted 2007-02-28 03:29 PM


If you show this to Isabel she might just go on strike

You are the sauce the course and force
The very essence of the source


Oh, now I get it!  You meant that in a nice way right?  Not that she is the most petite, wildest little tornado I think I have ever met.  We both know she deserves this lovely poem, as boy does she take good care of you!  They don't make them like her anymore Sy, so a poem once in awhile is a very wise, and good idea.

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2007-02-28 06:00 PM


Sharon,
You are a young wise owl.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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11 posted 2007-02-28 06:53 PM


Sir Sy.... just B E A U T I F U L!!!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine
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12 posted 2007-02-28 07:13 PM


Give my hugs to your love, Sy...

how special this is!




Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2007-02-28 08:26 PM


RDB,
Thank you sweetie.

Sunshine,
Thank you dear.

Startime55
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14 posted 2007-03-01 01:14 PM


I am sure your words lift her heart filling her with the warmth of your love...It is wonderful to read of love such as this and read the words that love inspires...I am glad you posted this one again for all of us to share in the precious love you have for her...**Big Hugs**

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2007-03-01 02:28 PM


Startime55
Thank you for understanding.

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16 posted 2007-03-01 05:08 PM


A beautifully tender poem full of appreciation for your other half.  How lucky she is ... oh, but perhaps you are luckier to have her as such.  Enjoyed very much but, sad to say, from a standpoint of envy.  
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17 posted 2007-03-01 05:12 PM


Ahhhhhh ... this is sooo romantic, lucky lady.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2007-03-01 05:57 PM


Honeybunch
Very sweet comment, thank you.

Janette,
Thank you so much.

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19 posted 2007-03-01 06:40 PM


You are the distaff of my goal
The other half completes my soul
Siyo Seymore Tabin,my brother you give hope to every woman with the open honest love you show the lady of your life,that there are still the magic prince of fairy tales. My heart thanks you that you love her well,and are so proud to say so!
my blessings


  granny!

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2007-03-01 09:08 PM


wredgranny
Thank you for the lovely reply.

The Lady
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21 posted 2007-03-01 09:11 PM




"You are the holder of my heart
That wisp of kiss that was the start"

ahhh Sir Sy
how wonderful to remember that wisp of kiss...

Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2007-03-01 10:51 PM


Lady
It's something I can't forget.

RavenSmith
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23 posted 2007-03-02 06:56 PM


Wow! Enjoyed! That Pandora Box is a kicker for sure. Thin lines between love/hate or need for both and yet a good box to close too with lessons on paths. I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.

~Best Regards,Raven Smith

Seymour Tabin
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24 posted 2007-03-02 09:05 PM


RavenSmith
Thank you for the read and encouraging reply.

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25 posted 2007-03-05 04:42 PM


You are the other part of me
That gave me wings and set me free

This was definitely penned with an inkwell of love. *S* Beautiful work!!!

Seymour Tabin
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26 posted 2007-03-05 04:57 PM


suthern
So nice to see you.

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