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he11oxNASTY
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0 posted 2007-02-27 08:36 PM


It's funny how a feeling can change
In only a single day
Because all I've ever wanted was confidence
And I almost had it
And then I felt it drift away
Like mimicking the sun
It left with the day
And I can almost be positive
about my feelings of tomorrow
But the day is as unpredictable
As my moods.

April-Lyn

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1 posted 2007-02-27 10:22 PM


I know how this is
aziza
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2 posted 2007-02-28 02:37 AM


Yes, I understand this too.
I enjoyed a lot.

A

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