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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-02-27 07:49 PM


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Know too
You will go

Ah well,
My chest has told me
Just as much

So if you will
Before I go
Without all that silly
Dancing round

Teach me then
In the final end
How  to die


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-02-27 07:53 PM


wonderful John ... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Juju
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2 posted 2007-02-27 08:51 PM


I will always be a fan, John

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Huan Yi
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3 posted 2007-02-27 09:59 PM


Juju,

You're too young
to be a fan of anyone
beyond your own life;
love it.


John

passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-02-28 07:28 AM


this is a bit sad, but there is a power in acceptance
LeeJ
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5 posted 2007-02-28 08:37 AM


agree with PS, power in acceptance and allowing


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6 posted 2007-03-05 11:25 PM


The religious Hokey-Pokey.....that's what it's all about......!

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