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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-02-27 07:22 PM


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rails disappear
into a winter mist

melted snow
lies in pools

along the road
another year
without her here

water drips
from wooden eaves


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-02-27 07:44 PM


oh  John!  heartfelt write hugs to you   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-02-27 10:20 PM


gosh
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3 posted 2007-02-27 10:48 PM


well done
a very emotional write

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Huan Yi
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4 posted 2007-02-27 11:06 PM


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Thank you all

I don't know
what to say . . .


John


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LeeJ
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5 posted 2007-02-28 08:56 AM


winter drips from wooden eves

John, your word art is amazing...

Janette
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6 posted 2007-02-28 11:05 PM


I could hear the melting drops of sadness.

Haunting read.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2007-03-02 09:29 PM


Delicate etching
Huan Yi
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8 posted 2007-03-02 09:32 PM



Thank you again
everyone

I'm still surprised.

I should write only when
the heart is speaking.

Thanks all again

John

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