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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2007-02-27 10:50 AM


Repost:


Epopee

I would to write an epopee
To sooth our blights reality
To touch the tender of each heart
To wash away the anxious part

I wish to hail humanity
To sail a kite of sanity
To make it wax in every part
To salve those wounds that pox the heart

Whispers seep above my head
Burst about this living bed
Fragile as a butterfly
Mounted on a flowers lie

I would for it to mix with air
And be inhaled by all that’s there
Intoxicate the passage goal
And set a sign upon each soul

To tide a light and brand in rhyme
To ride a grain of sand in time


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1 posted 2007-02-27 11:46 AM


SeymourLovie~

You epopee
in such a grand way
*gifting* us with
your poetic sway~

Love ya' poet~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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MGROVES
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2 posted 2007-02-27 11:48 AM


your a breath of fresh air this morning, and as always, a smile in my heart

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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3 posted 2007-02-27 11:52 AM


My morning cup of seymour, and nope, I don't mind if it is reheated.

Somehow you are always fresh.

AND sweet.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2007-02-27 12:23 PM


Good morning, Mr. T.!

"To touch the tender of each heart" ~ and this you do each and every day, m'dear sweet sonneteering friend!

Your epopee poem spurred me to rework and repost my own epopee, The Suns Are Rising.

Have a glorious day!

Angel hugs 'n kisses,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2007-02-27 12:41 PM


Marge,
You are a dear my dear.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2007-02-27 12:45 PM


MGROVES
You are the warmth of a sunny day.

Serenity,
Thank you sweetheart.


Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2007-02-27 12:46 PM


Earth Angel
And the angels sing. You are a love.

Enchantress
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8 posted 2007-02-27 01:27 PM


B E A U T I F U L !!
AND you were missed!
& , Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Martie
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9 posted 2007-02-27 02:47 PM


Sy

I kept wanting to say, me too...but I think you have done it first.  

ivordavies
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10 posted 2007-02-27 03:15 PM


"To ride a grain of sand in time"

as sand and time, in rhyme are mine....

Sey,

you make your wishes everybodies to share...

Ivor

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2007-02-27 03:58 PM


Nancy,
So glad you are better.

Martie,
You always say the right thing.

Ivor,
I was away but glad to be back, thank you.

steavenr
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12 posted 2007-02-27 04:03 PM


all good--as usual--but especially liked

'I wish to hail humanity
To sail a kite of sanity
To make it wax in every part
To salve those wounds that pox the heart'

and how we all need that salve...

The Lady
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13 posted 2007-02-27 04:39 PM




"I would for it to mix with air
And be inhaled by all that’s there
Intoxicate the passage goal
And set a sign upon each soul"

just sitting here
breathing it in Sir Sy

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2007-02-27 06:52 PM


steavenr
Thank you for the read and reply.

Lady,
Always a pleasure to read your comments.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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15 posted 2007-02-27 07:45 PM


Sir Sy.... just lovely!!!   RDB
did you have a nice vacation? We missed you!!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2007-02-27 10:01 PM


RDB
Yes but now I need a vacation to recoup.
Thank you

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