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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-02-27 01:25 AM


Forlorn skeletal trees
Spinsters in a line
Looking for perfection
Arms reaching
Their whispers plaintively begging
For green linen dresses
To wrap bared bark
In shimmers of silver

Rooted toes tapping lightly
Against frozen ground
As dark eyes peer hopefully
Dreaming of the sun
Yearning to dance again

aziza

[This message has been edited by aziza (02-27-2007 03:03 AM).]

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ChaoticHazeLight
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1 posted 2007-02-27 07:01 AM


Seemed very surreal.  Felt like I was on another planet.  Try writing some short fantasy stories.  I'd like to see what you come up with.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-02-27 07:44 AM


perfect!
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2007-02-28 12:57 PM


Thank you for reading
and enjoying.

A

Janette
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4 posted 2007-02-28 11:41 PM


The trees do look sad right now, this made me long to see them "dance" again, soon.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

The Lady
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5 posted 2007-03-01 07:48 PM



I love your naked spinster trees aziza


steavenr
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6 posted 2007-03-01 09:06 PM


excellent imagery...your canvass painted your picture perfectly
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