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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2007-02-27 12:38 PM



The city appears so innocent
And for a moment I believe
That beneath the layers of snow
I can erase the memories
Somehow I can forget the filth
And create a world of beauty

And even if I am not enough
Don't tell me I cannot dream
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qN20KgVGSmg

(I totally forgot the title of the poem)

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

© Copyright 2007 Juju - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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1 posted 2007-02-27 01:28 AM


You write with beautiful simplicity.  This poem is as clean as the snowy city you describe.  It's beautiful.

A

tracie66
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2 posted 2007-02-27 04:50 AM


well penned.
~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-02-27 07:49 AM




keeping this one!

Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2007-02-27 09:38 AM


Wow thatnk you every one!!!
Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Angel4aKing
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5 posted 2007-02-27 06:32 PM


You look just like a friend of mine that I haven't seen in a while and your poetry also reflects her personality. Take Care, I like this one alot, you are truely beautiful!!! JulieAnn

~~~kingsangel~~~

rachaelfuchsberger
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6 posted 2007-02-27 06:47 PM


I remember the snow well. Sometimes I can't picture it, but you've brought back the emotion it evokes. Elegant simplicity.

Rachael

vandana
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7 posted 2007-02-27 07:00 PM


enjoyed
Rick
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8 posted 2007-02-28 05:33 PM


Dear Juju, the beauty of the world can be created from the beauty of your heart, believe in yourself; believe in people and things will get better. May your thoughts join will all the wishes and dreams created every moment and together unite to make a wonderful world for us all.

Really enjoyed your write my friend, keep your dream and never give up.

Rick  

Juju
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In your dreams
9 posted 2007-02-28 07:17 PM


Thankyou for the responces.  Rick thankyou.

-Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2007-02-28 09:49 PM


You can dream...James
Juju
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In your dreams
11 posted 2007-03-02 08:02 PM


Thankyou james

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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