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steavenr
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0 posted 2007-02-27 12:21 PM



what are the meanings of your ways
when dusk turns to darkness,
and slips beyond my grasp

how do you make me long for you
as roses that need the shined-on rain
and grow in their tender beauty

when will you permit the audience
of your grace, as face to face
i gaze upon your essence

mesmerized, undone by all your charm


© Copyright 2007 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2007-02-27 06:56 AM


This is so beautiful, Steaven.

ChaoticHazeLight
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2 posted 2007-02-27 06:59 AM


You...  Boggled my mind in a maze of sudden allure.  That was mindblowing.
arthur
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3 posted 2007-02-27 07:51 AM


enjoyed
what is more bitter sweet than un requited love
arthur

passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-02-27 08:00 AM



Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-02-28 06:55 PM


Steaven... just beautiful!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2007-02-28 07:12 PM



If I could be some paper
I would love to carry this
upon me.


LeeJ
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7 posted 2007-02-28 07:18 PM


beautifully romantic
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-02-28 10:08 PM


Nice...James
Janette
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9 posted 2007-02-28 10:22 PM


Ahhhhh ... romance ... *sigh* ... ya gotta love it!

Enjoyed.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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