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luminosity
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0 posted 2007-02-26 03:11 PM


immersed in Grace

way over my head

because You lived

and died

for me


I believed

not out of duty

or dread of damnation

but because

I wanted to


upward my thoughts

are drawn by Your presence

to Love unsurpassed


and the closer I get

the more I don’t want

to come down

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2007-02-26 08:22 PM


I believed

...

because

I wanted to

~*~

You know what, little sister...

that's the best way.

It's been so long,
and I have missed you.




JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-02-26 09:04 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2007-02-26 09:14 PM



Beautiful!  An excellent write.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2007-02-26 10:57 PM


Amen to this!
luminosity
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5 posted 2007-02-27 10:07 AM


thank you....sigh...I miss being here as well...but the blocking at work keeps me away...and the only dial up I have is like cave man slow....*looks around to see if she affended any cave men*
love you guys

suthern
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6 posted 2007-03-05 04:39 PM


upward my thoughts

are drawn by Your presence

to Love unsurpassed


and the closer I get

the more I don’t want

to come down

I don't blame you... especially not knowing the depths that once claimed you! *S* Beautiful!!

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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7 posted 2007-03-05 05:49 PM


wow i really needed to hear this.

~~~kingsangel~~~

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