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he11oxNASTY
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0 posted 2007-02-26 12:39 PM


The particles of midday
Fall together at last
They recollect
As you examine
Your thoughts well kept.

April-Lyn

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1 posted 2007-02-26 12:45 PM


like it!
Janette
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2 posted 2007-03-01 12:00 PM


I enjoyed this piece of midday.

Clever write.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

LeeJ
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3 posted 2007-03-01 07:11 AM


this made me feel so peaceful
well done!!!

he11oxNASTY
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4 posted 2007-03-02 05:09 PM


Thanks you guys!

April-Lyn

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