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steavenr
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0 posted 2007-02-25 08:16 PM


obsession…Kelvin climbing higher
obsession…F5 refreshing,
hoping to see, not finding
blinded by the opiate of seeking

obsession…reminder of futility
obsession…caustic lye of vanity
counting hopes as leaping sheep
while dreams go by unexplained

sewn in ‘futality’,
etymology…
futile vitality

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2007-02-25 09:28 PM


Wow...I started down one road as I read this, and changed my direction many degrees...
Futility?  Let me read it again

steavenr
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2 posted 2007-02-25 09:44 PM


ah TD, but it is futality, m'dear, and for those of us who love to make up words ..... this one is primo...
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2007-02-25 09:56 PM


So what you're sayin' is...you have an overactive imagination?  
Janette
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4 posted 2007-02-26 09:57 AM


DUH!  

OHMYGOSH, I said it out loud.

I found myself tracing my way to Websters after reading this piece.

et·y·mol·o·gy ... your linguistic usage is amazing here.

WOW!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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