Do you remember the stars?

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James McInerney
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since 2003-09-27

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0 posted 2007-02-25 06:33 PM

Do you remember the stars?

You told me to remind you about the stars.

You said that if you ever forgot, I was to remind you of the stars and it would all be OK.

You told me to remind you of how you felt that night.

How nothing else mattered, and you could have been falling off the edge of forever and you would not of cared.

You told me to remind you of how small you felt looking up at the stars, but with me by your side you felt safe.... you felt secure.

You felt like the sky was watching over you...protecting you!

And then you told me not to be afraid anymore...

For your tears were not tears of sadness, but happiness...a reflection of how you felt inside.

And that we were gonna be OK.

For tonight the sky was ours

We were finally together.

Please tell me that you remember the stars?

MGROVES

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california

1 posted 2007-02-25 06:57 PM

precious~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

passing shadows
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displaced

2 posted 2007-02-26 07:45 AM

wonderful write here

and you have reminded me of what I'd forgotten too

Janette

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Chicagoland for now

3 posted 2007-02-26 09:48 AM

A lovely rememberance.

Enjoyed.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2007-02-26 09:50 AM

James~
To take a life conversation as lovely as this and turn it over to the readers is simply a delight ... thank you ... touches the tender of me~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

he11oxNASTY
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since 2007-02-21

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5 posted 2007-02-26 12:30 PM

I really enjoyed this one. It brought back memories of my own that I don't want to forget. Thanks for this write :-)

April-Lyn

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

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missouri

6 posted 2007-02-26 05:10 PM

It sounds rather sad to me..as if the she needs to be reminded of what you two have together...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2007-02-26 08:34 PM

Nice writing...James

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

8 posted 2007-02-26 08:38 PM

Beautiful and much enjoyed!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

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Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2007-02-26 10:27 PM

James.... just beautiful!! RDB
I really like your writing style

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

aziza
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10 posted 2007-02-27 01:36 AM

This is so lovely and poignant. You took my breath away.

A

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