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Sunshine
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0 posted 2007-02-24 10:01 PM



February’s March of Snow


Rain danced by thunderous flood,
and the 3 a.m. awakening did just that
flood storm dreams of wake and sleep, of
up, down, prance, dance in trance
until the six a.m. alarm, then, quiet,

too late, awake, up, too far into the day
to think otherwise, and so, do, deal,
think, sort, clean, organize,

and then nine struck and sleep filled
these eyes oh green how the grass might be
but wait…forecasts of Phil might be played
and displayed with humor, for the blizzard
awaits,

like a hungry lizard having gone through
winter’s clime and whine, now greedy and
feeling the last days’ degrees of warm
could be caught, unaware,
as snow falls, an April’s fool, a month
plus days early,

still, during rains and clouds gathering,
I walked the land, not country, not city,
just temporarily ours, finding surprises of all forms…
this hand moving back decaying but giving leaves,
the beginning of tomorrow’s spring,
with the slightest inches of tulip and daylily,

and the remnant of a deer’s hoof print in
the dirt yet to be planted…

No wonder Abby’s nose lifted to air.

I write this prelude to Spring, with large
snowflakes pelting my windows
and its sill.

~*~

© February 24, 2007
Karilea Rilling Jungel


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1 posted 2007-02-24 10:46 PM


It's sure is some kind of strange late winter weather m'friend.
Sleep warm~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-02-24 10:49 PM


Karilea... you write of such beauty! enjoyed... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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3 posted 2007-02-25 09:57 AM


nice read
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4 posted 2007-02-25 12:10 PM


Just loverly K.  I heard on the news today, that Kansas really got hit with snow again?  This weather is really scary when you take a good look at what is going on in the world.  Nice to see it written up so beautifully.

         
Carpe' Diem    

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5 posted 2007-02-25 12:22 PM


I have found this weather so strange. I think the plants may be confused. There are some out in front of my house that has sprouted, and have little buds on them. I'm not sure what they are, because I didn't put them there. So, I guess I will have to wait until they open up to see what they are.
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6 posted 2007-02-25 12:32 PM


always as amazing as you. we can always count on you for some sunshine. weather is a bit off~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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7 posted 2007-02-26 08:38 PM


It was quite the weekend, believe me.  Luckily our own area didn't have much but rain, and wind, so we picked up long limbs in the soggy muck, but, still...I have a feeling that Phil is still playing with us, and another storm might well pelt the midwest.

We've seen snow in May.

Be well, and safe, all of you!


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8 posted 2007-02-27 02:32 PM


Dear Sissie

California trades her 80's clear for raindrops falling and snow so near

the music played the roof all night
and I    curled and warm
opened the window to feel the storm.


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9 posted 2007-02-27 04:42 PM


this was so 'easy listening' that I could almost hear claude debussy's "prelude to the afternoon of a fawn" playing in the background.   Lovely, just lovely.
Rick
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10 posted 2007-02-27 07:07 PM


Karilea, this painted such a picture, one that was very much enjoyed, your seasons are so much different than ours my friend, but I did feel as with you for these moments and felt your time of year.

Sincerely
Rick

Ps, nice picture as well my friend.

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11 posted 2007-02-28 12:04 PM


and I am so glad that you weathered the weather surrounding you well and are safe.  Nicely done MommaK.  
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12 posted 2007-02-28 12:54 PM


still, during rains and clouds gathering,
I walked the land, not country, not city,
just temporarily ours, finding surprises of all forms…
this hand moving back decaying but giving leaves,
the beginning of tomorrow’s spring,
with the slightest inches of tulip and daylily,

Outstanding...I loved this poem of yours, it is profoundly aware...


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