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tears flow as rain god sees his childrens pain

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MGROVES
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God opened
the heavens wide~
looking upon
his children
who try to hide~

wanted to see~
his children
he loved
so faithfully~

what he saw
brought tears
that filled the sky~

pouring down
as rain
God could only cry~

all the terror
the pain
abuse never ending~
not his word
nor message
man is sending~

for mans pleasure
and greed~
taking from families
their spirits
broken
hearts and souls
destroying gods seed~

how can man
be so cruel~
attacking ones
so helpless
to small and young
to defend
or even stand
thats how a man
thinks hes a man
powerful like a king
destroying babies
as their tool~

the cycle
has to end~
the pain
has to stop
scars have to mend~

we all have been hurt~
abused
and treated as dirt~

we all deserve
some pleasure in life
love and joy~
not used as
a sex toy~
for gain,greed
and money
only destroy~

Gods anger and his fear
for their survival~
a great storm
is coming
there wont be
no trumpets
no singing
it wont be no revival~

Gods word
LOVE
does not mean
to take for bodily
pleasure~
to work, to live
to share and keep life
and this land
as beautiful
and eternal
as his word
our gift
man should only
treasure~

evil shall
get what
evil deserves
and what evil
desires~
like the son
burning in
an eternal
fire~

forgiveness
must start~
pain and past
must part~

lies and wars
must end~
as a family
gods word
open your hearts
he shall mend~

or the only light
god will see~
a fire as the sun
flames for eternity~

no man
no life
no hate
no wars
no lies~
only the stars
and a few good souls
will share the heavens
and the sky~


My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

[This message has been edited by MGROVES (02-24-2007 07:25 PM).]

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1 posted 02-24-2007 08:06 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

It certainly does sadden one to see all
that he has given turn to rubble and
death.
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2 posted 02-24-2007 08:08 PM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

shame the evil ones dont see it,cant see
without a soul

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

[This message has been edited by MGROVES (02-25-2007 12:30 PM).]

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An outpouring from the heart, in beautiful rain, may cleanse the earth of apathy and pain.

God Bless M.
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wonderful and profound piece!

glad you found the words
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Marcia~
Blessed be the children ... you've told it like it is~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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good read
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thank all of you for you kind replies~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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Enjoyed...James
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MGROVES
And the meek shall inherit the earth.
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we shall thanks sy

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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good read
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the shame that it brings can last a lifetime, god heals, then the devil brings it back on. the devil wont shame me ever again as my key to life is living a loyal life with gods word

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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