Open Poetry #40 |
Snowflakes on concrete |
Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Snowflakes on concrete, White doilies lick hard gray street- Taste the grit and die. Dingy sky dandruff Almost reaches brown bare sand, Speckles corner trash. Dry-weed-stalk-caught bags Gather under snaggle trees, Dance in frigid breeze. Baby dances too Drips sunshine from chubby hands. Spring blooms in blue eyes. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The world through the eyes of a baby is a beautiful place indeed! Nan, whatever is seen through your seeing eyes is worth reading about! Very well done!!! Loving hug, Linda |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"... Taste the grit and die. ... Dingy sky dandruff" Wonderful imagery here. I especially adored these descriptions ... very creative! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhNan~ These are simply superb~ What beautiful images portrayed in your Haiku/Senryu's~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks guys, I appreciate it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
....lemme tell ya about the snow we get here in Orange County....oh that's right, I already did! .....sigh.....oh those millions of white pear blossoms.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Rub it in. It's supposed to be 70 today. When Spring gets here, it gets here fast. (and then it goes away, and then it comes back, and then it goes away...) Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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