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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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0 posted 2007-02-23 11:51 PM


at my limit—never had that problem
before
only 3 per diem who would have
thought
my muse would be not welcome
here
shouldn’t have wasted it on
drivel
about the dumb stuck ‘d’ key
before
maybe we could change it to poems
read
and at my ratio my limit might reach
hundreds
or
more
drats, just used another 1 of three—will I never
learn?


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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
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Chester, England
1 posted 2007-02-24 12:02 PM


Steven,

Interesting write, I actually thought that being able to post 3 a day was generous!

I am currently posting my previous work and taking a golden opportunity to edit it as I go along. (something I had dreaded because creativity disappears when faced with monotonous task) This way I am actually enjoying reviewing my work!

But at this time, because I am going past the site's midnight, I can post SIX !

Ivor

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
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Chester, England
2 posted 2007-02-24 12:03 PM


You missed the clock!

This one is now the first of three!

steavenr
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3 posted 2007-02-24 12:05 PM


well done, Ivor, nothing like beating the system... at anything...

3 a day for me is like warping into over-drive...this Edsel brain can't handle it...

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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4 posted 2007-02-24 12:23 PM


You made me laugh -- because I understand so well.  I love your poetry and look forward to my three a day that I get to read.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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5 posted 2007-02-24 01:25 AM


psst!  Steaven... I like your work too!! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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