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Open Poetry #40

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-02-23 09:14 PM

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Ah, Dear Girl
We are passing

The moon
Though not quite full

Will wonder why
We did not simply
Bow to law

Yet give respect
In retrospect
To our failure
With the rule

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2007-02-23 10:41 PM

your work is lovely
as always John

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2007-02-23 10:44 PM

Thank you

I never stop
being surprised
at what draws favorable attention.

Thank you again

John

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2007-02-24 12:53 PM

I agree with Lady Kate!! just wonderful John

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

4 posted 2007-02-25 03:41 PM

"Yet give respect
In retrospect
To our failure
With the rule"

Ahhh yes ... "retrospect" ... usually reveals the good as well as greatly highlights the bad. Darn it! *wink wink*

Enjoyed!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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