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Master
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Boston, MA

0 posted 2007-02-23 08:44 PM


Teach me to dance a waltz,
To lose myself and lead,
Synchronize my pulse
With the music’s beat.
Teach me each single turn
And a firm grip,
So that my hands can learn
Not to let yours slip.
Show me a way to kiss,
Keeping my eyes – closed
And afterwards, savor bliss
Of paradise lost,
To breathe, exhale air,
And again  -- from scratch! --
To fall in love, flare,
Melting the snow in March.

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Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2007-02-24 05:15 PM


I enjoyed this one.  We'd all like to learn that waltz.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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2 posted 2007-02-25 01:28 AM


good to read you again


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-02-25 01:50 AM


oh my yes!  I like this!     RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Janette
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4 posted 2007-02-25 10:03 AM


"To lose myself and lead, ...

And again  -- from scratch! --"  (<------ good one!)

I enjoyed the selfless love of this dance of courtship.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2007-02-25 11:39 AM


Master~
I always love reading you ... and this is no exception~

There is a beautiful softness to your thoughts in this one~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-02-25 10:34 PM


Enjoyed...James
gohomethx
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7 posted 2007-02-25 11:12 PM


i really liked this poem

Tomorrow we will run faster, stretch out our arms farther.... And one fine morning-

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