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Open Poetry #40

The King of Kings

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2007-02-23 07:52 PM

A new era is about to dawn,
An era for a new king to spawn.
Bow down to the King.
Searched for a long while,
Ended in one last trial.
The King is coming...
There can be only one,
This is where you should run.
On your knees dog the King is here!
Feel your fear grow inside you,
Feel your fear it's all so true.
Bow down to the King.
Found the potential to solve this puzzle,
Meanwhile you tried to have me in a muzzle.
Into the dirt my will be done.
The King is here,
Now feel your fear.
ALL hail the king.
In this era I am the dawning,
I'm the king that shall be spawning.
Behold the King,
Cut the last binding string.
BOW DOWN TO THE KING!
And I am the King,
I AM the King, the King of all Kings....

Now feel your fear, there can be only one

Stephanos

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since 2000-07-31

Posts 3618
Statesboro, GA, USA

1 posted 2007-02-23 08:55 PM

Interesting Christian allusions here.

So are you speaking of Jesus Christ, or another?

And if so, I was wondering if by phrases like "to spawn", "on your knees dog", "feel your fear grow" ... and the generally metallic austerity of the piece, you were implying that Christ shall appear hard and cruel, in the eyes of the wicked when he comes again? Or if you had someone else in mind entirely when you say "King of Kings"?

Stephen.

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

2 posted 2007-02-23 09:06 PM

i didnt mean jesus christ at all...

Stephanos

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since 2000-07-31

Posts 3618
Statesboro, GA, USA

3 posted 2007-02-23 11:15 PM

who then?

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

4 posted 2007-02-23 11:20 PM

"Now feel your fear" yes, i felt this grow from line to line.

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2007-02-25 12:42 PM

always interesting~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2007-02-26 05:07 PM

Ah...I dunno about the KING part boyo...I do like the poem tho

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