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rachaelfuchsberger
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since 2007-02-21
Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

0 posted 2007-02-23 03:09 PM



Just 5 minutes,

I want just 5 minutes,

5 waking minutes,

5 peaceful minutes

5 baby free minutes

5 hubby free minutes

5 drama free minutes

5 ME minutes!

Just 5 minutes.



Just 1 hour.

I want just 1 hour.

1 waking hour.

1 peaceful hour.

1 expectation free hour.

1 stress free hour.

1 pain free hour.

1 ME hour.

Just 1 hour.



Just 1 day.

I want just 1 day.

1 working day.

1 peaceful day.

1 responsibility free day.

1 anger free day.

1 depression free day.

1 ME day!

Just 1 day.



Just 1 week.

I want just 1 week.

1 waking week.

1 peaceful week.

1 accident free week.

1 worry free week.

1 mess free week.

1 ME week!

Just 1 week.



Just 1 month.

I want just 1 month.

1 waking month

1 peaceful month

1 hate free month

1 regret free month

1 need free month

1 ME month!

Just one month.



Just 1 year,

I want just 1 year.

1 waking year.

1 peaceful year

1 frustration free year

1 swearing free year

1 exhaustion free year

1 ME year!

Just 1 year.



All I want,

is 5 minutes,

1 hour,

1 week,

1 month,

1 year,

Just one lifetime.

Rachael

© Copyright 2007 Rachael Fuchsberger - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2007-02-24 12:16 PM


I can read the frustration in this one.  And I remember when the kids were small and it seemed like I was exhausted all the time.  But then they grew up and left, and after the first blessed quiet week, I wanted them back.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-02-24 02:32 AM


Rachael... I wish you 1 minute. 1 hr. 1 day, 1 week, 1 month, 1 year,... and most of all 1 lifetime for you to enjoy the way you want to   well said my friend ! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
3 posted 2007-02-24 03:26 AM


Can these run concurrently?
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