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luminosity
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0 posted 2007-02-23 03:06 PM


now full to over boiling
the angry words well up
in a scream
but consequences quickly realized
seal lips
injustice effectively muted

resolution refused
the anger now contained perverts
its barbs penetrate
needful calluses
reaching deep to
that which is
yet untouched

hardness turns to soft sobs
as silence unmitigated
takes its toll

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*not very luminous...I know...but after the darkness...comes the Light *sighs and smiles*

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Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2007-02-23 03:07 PM


Write on

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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2 posted 2007-02-23 03:39 PM


awww this is sad. Hope you are feeling better soon if this is how you are feeling. Take Care, JulieAnn

~~~kingsangel~~~

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Member Seraphic
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3 posted 2007-03-05 04:50 PM


but consequences quickly realized
seal lips
injustice effectively muted

And that muting can be like acid, eating away at us. *S*

Superb write, my friend... and big hugs. *S*

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