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visit to the forest |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
saw the elk in tender stream of spring standing elegantly as statue still eyes meeting eyes as if to rendezvous nature’s beast to nature’s child and crossing the tepid tide, I stopped to meet the interloper face to face sinewy, strong, and lithe he gazed beyond the stream into my soul and spoke in volumes silent, yet volumes unmistakable, to soothe and I crossed into a knowledge new— he crossed, his eyes departed into a denizen of forever forest silence |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such peace imparted, eyes to eyes. Perfect description of nature's beast to nature's child. Thanks for writing this.  |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
damn! I need to go for a drive like this. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
TD, but the question is...who is the beast and who is the child...thank you for commenting Angel4, 'tis the majesty of nature... 'tis all around...enjoy... and thank you for reading and commenting |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"into a denizen of forever forest silence" Wow! This is a lovely poetic ending. I just adore Bambi. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
opppps ... I guess Bambi is NOT an Elk. *wink wink* Still both have lovely eyes. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and maybe the other question is who is the interloper? well done steaven |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Janette, who says you can't have an elk named Bambi? Thank you for your comments--both of them! excellent question, ThisLady...touché --thanks for commenting |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my Steaven.... absolutely beautiful words here... I was mesmerized! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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