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0 posted 2007-02-23 02:15 PM


(Here's a re-post of a love song I wrote in late 2005 I felt fitting to share again now in that we've just entered the Pisces stage in the zodiac, inspired from a dream I had of meeting my dream love, and she seemed like a Pisces because of all the imagination and soft fantasy surrounding her, and because my sun sign is Scorpio (Scorpio Rising and Cancer Moon both on the Pisces decan with four planets in the 12th house), Scorpios are known to blend well with other water signs especially, yay! )

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Pisceans Sure Know How To Kiss
By: Noah Eaton
11/9/05

Whispering beyond the misted curtains,
her soft sea green eyes shimmering with uncertain,
lost in bead-curtained fantasia.
double-dipped in moonstone,
No one can deny she’s a goddess,
with tamed lips rouged in red grape pomace,
soft-covered in still waters,
contemplating the lotus, atoned...

Glissading through my bloodstream,
like the rising, rejuvenated manatee,
she’s the oxygen in my blood breathing.
Her sweet surrender washes over any cicatrice,
her body rises like a swelling abyss,
I taste her selflessness dripping into my orifice…

...mmm, mmm, Pisceans sure know how to kiss...
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She wears Amphitrite’s mantle like a bathrobe,
I love the way the prisms drip from her earlobes,
just under the surface you’re always ritualizing,
whispering of the dolphins,
slowly my fingertips begin disrobing your water,
inhaling the dessert of your starry-eyed moisture,
long-lasting frothing tide,
rushing from your ocean to my lips...

Glissading through my bloodstream,
like the rising, rejuvenated manatee,
she’s the oxygen in my blood breathing.
Her sweet surrender washes over any cicatrice,
her body rises like a swelling abyss,
I taste her selflessness dripping into my orifice…

...mmm, mmm, Pisceans sure know how to kiss…
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Mmmmm, mmmmm,
I love how it feels,
When your surrender washes over me...
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Mmmmm, mmmmm,
I love how it feels,
when your surrender washes over me...
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She’s compassion, zen and damiana,
lathering the deepest wonders of me,
running my fingers through her hair,
like a sea horse in coral reef Elysium,
inhaling pacifist mystique...


"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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1 posted 2007-02-23 03:06 PM


Way to go Noah

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2 posted 2007-02-23 05:53 PM


Noah, I wish I could "hear" some of your music for your writing intrigues me.  

And I agree, as a persevering Scorpio you should do nicely with an imaginative Pisces.  

But do not limit yourself for you might do well with a protective Cancer or even an ambitious Capricorn, too.

I am Gemini.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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3 posted 2007-02-24 07:24 PM


a pisces here myself~  always a pleasure to visit you and read your amazing words~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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4 posted 2007-02-24 10:44 PM


loved this song of your sweet Noah... and for the record 'we' capricorns know a thing or two about kissing!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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