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Janette
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0 posted 2007-02-23 08:57 AM


his touch

when he touched her neck
she vacillated
with the preference
between his callused
fingertips or his
tender lips and tongue

each had qualities
to spur nerve endings
into contractions
wildly affecting
her swift decision
to answer his touch

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2007-02-23 09:00 AM


Decisions....decisions....sometimes hard to make but oh the benefits reaped once made.  Nicely done Janette!  
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2 posted 2007-02-23 09:04 AM


Gentle Spirit, indeed I would NEVER want to miss any of those "reaped benefits!"

Thanks for the read!

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3 posted 2007-02-23 09:17 AM


  Janette.. wonderful words to create a lovely feeling...
   truly a special touch..  with a touch of class.
      Thank you for sharing this.

            MoonShadow
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4 posted 2007-02-23 09:26 AM


MoonShadow, I "vacillated" about posting this one.  
Thank you for the read and encouragement, your graciousness has "touched" me. *wink wink*

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passing shadows
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5 posted 2007-02-23 10:36 AM


I'm greedy! I'd want them both!

beautiful poem here

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6 posted 2007-02-23 12:23 PM


passing shadows, I am "greedy" as well, so we are in agreement. *wink*
Thanks for the reply.

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2007-02-23 07:10 PM


yes me too! I would want them both!!   RDB  lovely imagery here RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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8 posted 2007-02-23 10:45 PM




oops!
I want them both too!

greedy me

great write Janette

Janette
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9 posted 2007-02-24 09:36 AM


Roniece & The Lady - Thanks for your replies, they have made me smile.  Especially since you agree with me ... most of us ladies are "greedy."  *wink wink*

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10 posted 2007-02-24 10:31 AM


Oooo, Janette, I knew I was in for a tremble or two when I read the title ~ and by whom is was written!

It's been too long a while since I have had the pleasure of experiencing your words, m'dear  Poetessa 'Sensuosa'.



EA

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11 posted 2007-02-24 11:05 AM


Earth Angel,  thank you for remembering me.  Gosh!  You make me smile.

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JamesMichael
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12 posted 2007-02-25 10:33 PM


Silky...James
Janette
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13 posted 2007-02-26 08:46 AM


Thanks James, I appreciate the reply.

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