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Magical Frozen Night
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Magical Frozen Night |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Magical Frozen Night Silver sheen of suspended light Shrouded behind crystal fog night Frozen air shaped by shards of ice A dim glow shines to entice Cast down upon snow banks white Cold snaps with the sharpest bite Skeletal trees still and cuddled tight Branches whisper of tomorrow day Dance silently with gentle sway Bone fingers long for warm sun bright World waits for dark to take flight Quiet settles ‘til dawn’s twilight Early sun does naught to ease the cold Light will paint art in pink and gold Sparkle of diamond snow delight ... aziza [This message has been edited by aziza (02-23-2007 10:47 PM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Alison... I love this!! your writings are always so beautiful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"Cold snaps with the sharpest bite Skeletal trees still and cuddled tight Branches whisper of tomorrow day Dance silently with gentle sway Bone fingers long for warm sun bright" Burrrrr ... Magical. (adored the skeletal trees and bone fingers ... great imagery!) always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
One of your best, lady. Simply beautiful! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
definitely one of your best! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
gr8 write  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Nature has never been one of my strong subjects to write about. This is beautiful. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You captured the cold perfectly in the skeletal limbs...could feel the icy fog, see the prism of the snowflake...very well crafted write. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
such descriptive imagery--you can really 'feel' the words...excellent... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
what pictures you draw here aziza beautiful... |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
such a beautiful poem! "Skeletal trees . . . Branches whisper" - powerful imagery! I so enjoyed this!! H, Robert |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
I miss the snow. Thank you, z. Your imagery brings it back to me. Rachael |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite!!  In the midst of winter, |
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ChaoticHazeLight Member
since 2006-06-13
Posts 71California, U.S. |
Your every word clung to me and I to them... You drew a very provacative painting of your soul with the words that only love knows... You are a beautiful person... Keep writing! |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
spring will come arthur |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you all- you know, you are melting my frozen night wtih the kindness and warmth you show. A |
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RavenSmith Member
since 2007-03-02
Posts 53Oregon |
Great imagery here! I love the winter and its cold is my surreal. Those winter nights are like yoga. I delighted in reading this poem. It makes me want to run to snow quickly. Thank you for sharing! ~Best Regards,Raven Smith |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
RavenSmith You make me smile with your words Thank you. A |
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