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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2007-02-23 02:15 AM


( pt.1 )
            
                                                  
The lights go down one by one,
until it is nighttime again
                  
When the sleepless dream their far,
far away, in some distant land
                
Peace and sweet breezes to make the mind tingle
                    
Exercise the knowledge inherent from the earth
inside the skeletons soul of bone,
and stone dust chants...
                              
...drumbeats begin soft and precise to measure
                                  
The recording of the lost worlds found again
Egypt holds the keys they seek
deep in the sands forgotten by time
asleep and aware they are rediscovered,
with a type of energy glowing
magic in motions                
                  
( pt. 2 )                                
                            
A prince without a princess once again
The legends of ancient return to time
Whispers in the willows of a man young at heart,
and soul
Searching out the lands from head to toe
transcending the barriers


In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

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1 posted 2007-02-23 03:20 AM


Wow!  I am entranced.  This is incredible and beautiful!  Thank you for sharing.

A

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2 posted 2007-02-23 03:41 AM


oh my James... I was taken along on this journey here... very very nice writing my friend RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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3 posted 2007-02-23 08:32 AM


"Exercise the knowledge inherent from the earth
inside the skeletons soul of bone,
and stone dust chants..."

Oh!  This makes me want to travel there, I do so love the magic of Egypt.
(great imagery here-skeletons soul of bone)

Enjoyed!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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4 posted 2007-02-23 08:34 AM


Your words are a gift for sore eyes m'friend. I am so pleased to find you/your words here this morning.  Much enjoyed. Peace babe.
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5 posted 2007-02-23 11:14 AM


This is wonderful writing Wolfie.
You have been missed!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

aujussy wolf
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6 posted 2007-02-25 07:36 PM


awww thanks it has been to long since i have released anything on pip ... i have lots more, i ll be sure to leave another rambling on journey ... again happy it was enjoyed : )   peace .... ~wolfman

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

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