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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-02-22 09:42 PM



My Midnight Confession

Wanting to tell the world
of the desires of my heart,
wanting to announce that
Suzie is my sweetheart.
Last night I took a
flight to the moon
and precisely at midnight,
I broadcast from a lunar balloon.
Above me an angels chorus
did impart, every word that
flowed from my heat.
"Suzie I love you,
I love you sweetheart."
My midnight confession
from the depths
of my heart.

JamesLee
22February
2007





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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-02-22 09:44 PM


James.... this is so beautiful!!!!  Your Suziepie is a very lucky girl   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

The Lady
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2 posted 2007-02-23 12:44 PM



James
midnight confessions are so honest
and sweet

nice...

aziza
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3 posted 2007-02-23 03:32 AM


Your heart is as beautiful as your poetry, I think.

A

Janette
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4 posted 2007-02-23 08:35 AM


"I broadcast from a lunar balloon."

Your Suzy is a lucky girl!

Enjoyed the romance in this one.
(great imagery here-"lunar balloon" ... so festive)

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-02-25 10:08 PM


Thank you Roneice, The Lady, aziza and Janette for the nice responses...James
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