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Janette
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0 posted 2007-02-22 04:50 PM


permanent mark

unconditional love
always creates
a permanent mark
on the soul

Janette

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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1 posted 2007-02-22 04:59 PM


indeed it does

so well said!

Janette
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2 posted 2007-02-22 05:05 PM


passing shadows, thank you for reading me and for being so matter of fact. *wink wink*

It has been a long while since I have ventured here........

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3 posted 2007-02-22 06:10 PM



   Janette.. Oh so profound and true... whether a lovely picture or a scar... very permanent.

   You have been greatly missed. Glad to read you again.

            MoonShadow
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4 posted 2007-02-22 06:14 PM


MoonShadow, thank you for your reply and thoughts.  Indeed unconditional love can leave "a lovely picture or a scar."

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5 posted 2007-02-22 06:15 PM


oh yes it does indeed - very lovely words here   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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6 posted 2007-02-22 06:17 PM


Roniece Dawson-Bruce, and thank YOU for your "lovely" reply.

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7 posted 2007-02-22 07:49 PM


So it does...
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8 posted 2007-02-22 07:53 PM


ChaoticHazeLight, thank you for your short reply to my short piece.  *wink wink*

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9 posted 2007-02-23 04:18 AM


Your words are so true
Thank you.

Alison

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10 posted 2007-02-23 04:27 AM


excellent insight. martyjo
Janette
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11 posted 2007-02-23 07:56 AM


Aziza & latearrival, thank you for your encouraging replies. I truly appreciate your comments.

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12 posted 2007-02-23 08:12 AM


Janette, unconditional love is the BEST kind of love there is....permanent markings indeed sweet lady.  I LOVE this.
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13 posted 2007-02-23 08:53 AM


Gentle Spirit, thanks for the read and the nod of agreement, too. *wink wink*

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14 posted 2007-02-23 05:04 PM


and if unconditional love leaves a mark, conditional must leave a stain...guess I'd rather be marked than stained... great write
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15 posted 2007-02-23 05:29 PM


steavenr, I agree, a "stain" seems ugly and corrupted.

Thanks for your thought provoking reply.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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16 posted 2007-02-23 06:46 PM


good read
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17 posted 2007-02-23 10:37 PM




venture here more often Janette
and bring more gifts like this


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18 posted 2007-02-23 11:05 PM


Indeed!  Profoundly simple and beautiful!
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19 posted 2007-02-24 09:26 AM


vandana and Robert - thank you for your time and replies.

The Lady - If and when time allows, and my muse is working, I usually post in "Mature."  Thank you for encouraging me to continue to wander into "Open." *wink wink*

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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