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steavenr
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0 posted 2007-02-22 01:36 PM



a glance beyond the window pane
reveals the loss i feel inside
to a glimpse of pain i feel within
'tis more than i can bare

to my self's reflection in the glass
bear it, yes...bare it, no
for baring would be sharing, and
sharing would be distasteful to my soul


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Robert Frazier
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1 posted 2007-02-22 02:30 PM


the emotion here is palpable . . . so strong, urgently sad.

Robert

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2007-02-22 05:40 PM


Hugs
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-02-22 06:17 PM


oh Steaven.. this is beautifully said.. sending you some of my special hugs in case you need them!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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