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Open Poetry #40

Cold

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2007-02-22 05:01 AM

It is cold. My eyes are heavy and stale.
Their bold blue, pale and motionless.
I stir these thoughts and images with my fragile mind.

I pave my heart over.
I've turned my sweetness into stone,
for now I have no love to give.

These cold glances that I glare at you,
as I say I love you.
Don't believe them unless you dare.

For my heart is paved in cement,
impossible to break,
impossible to love.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-02-22 07:18 AM

sometimes i think mine is too but the right man will come with the right equipment one day and tear that cement up

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2007-02-23 05:34 AM

Kellie... never give up on love...it's there waiting for you gorgeous girl... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2007-02-23 11:02 PM

I couldn't put it better than passing shadows did, so "ditto"...strong write, full of emotion...well done...

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

4 posted 2007-02-23 11:18 PM

a heart "paved in cement" . . . sad and powerful. I can feel the emotion.

Robert

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