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Which Way is Up? |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I am topsy-turvy tired Upside-down sideways Wringing out the winter flowers Casting off the icicle magic I am topsy-turvy tired Upside-down inside-out Dancing on the chickadee wing Singing night’s embrace I am topsy-turvy tired Upside-down right-side-up Flying on silken strands of time Soaring on dreams of tomorrow I am topsy-turvy tired Upside-down head-over-heels Floating over porcelain moon Listening to stars melodious cries I am topsy-turvy tired Upside down sunny-side-up Tumbling into the rabbit hole Gazing upon passion personified ... aziza |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Join the Club! I think we both enjoyed this one.... Ivor |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! you're just all over the place! Loved this! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
This piece sure did twirl me around. A very fun read, enjoyed. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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rachaelfuchsberger
since 2007-02-21
Posts 609Las Vegas, NV |
You're a deep person,z, and I love that about you. This poem, while the meaning may be hidden to others, brings a new understanding for me. Thank you. Rachael |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
This sounds like Alice down the Rabbit hole!!! I lIke it!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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he11oxNASTY Junior Member
since 2007-02-21
Posts 27 |
I like this one. I've definately felt that way more than once. You worded it perfectly. April-Lyn |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I am topsy-turvy tired ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Upside down sunny-side-up Upside-down inside-out Upside-down right-side-up Upside-down sideways Upside-down head-over-heels God help everyone when you're wide awake! Sounds like fun.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I am topsy turvy too... loved this !!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Upside down sunny-side-up Tumbling into the rabbit hole" excellent aziza you sure upended me |
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