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Paula Finn
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0 posted 2007-02-21 10:42 PM



I'm gonna go online
search a chat room or two
find another lonely heart
I'm gonna listen to you.

Don't need to know your name
whats on the screen will do
you want to be HOTMAMA
I'll be sweetdaddy just for you.

I'm in it for the fake believe
        fake believe
I'm in it for the fake believe

Don't need to know your age
or even where you live
I'm never gonna meet you
I ain't got that much to give.

And when it starts becoming
something more than just a game
I'll find another chat room
I'll use a different name.

I'm in it for the fake believe
        fake believe
I'm in it for the fake believe
I can't believe
you fell for me.


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iliana
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1 posted 2007-02-21 10:46 PM


Haha...."fake believe"....I had never heard that before and how appropriate!  This sounds like it could be a funky country honkytonk kinda song.
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2007-02-21 10:48 PM


How wonderful
sad
and often true.

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-02-21 10:51 PM


yes very true and I can almost hear the tune to go with it !     RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2007-02-22 07:36 AM


kinda makes me want to have a private investigator on my computer...

*giggles* a PCPI


LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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5 posted 2007-02-22 10:10 AM


would love to hear this set to music

sad
and it made me think of teenagers and how they sometimes do believe and get into trouble that way...
made me ache


Janette
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Chicagoland for now
6 posted 2007-02-22 10:40 AM


"And when it starts becoming
something more than just a game
I'll find another chat room
I'll use a different name.

I'm in it for the fake believe
        fake believe
I'm in it for the fake believe
I can't believe
you fell for me."

Sad to say many sing this tune in "fake believe," daily.

Awesome write/song here!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
7 posted 2007-02-23 08:09 PM


mother have i told you lately that you have issues? if not, you have issues

Now feel your fear, there can be only one

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