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Open Poetry #40

Body Whispers - (VI)

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-02-21 12:56 PM

Does it bother you
that I smile
as fingers play

Does it bother you
that my body demands
as my voice is silent

Does it bother you
that I think of you
without knowing

it is you I think of

until my body
whispers your name

...

aziza

ivordavies
Senior Member

since 2007-01-10

Posts 739
Chester, England

1 posted 2007-02-21 01:07 AM

This is exquisite free writing, I know of only one other poet(esse) (on another site) who has the ability to sy so much with so little...

Ivor

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

2 posted 2007-02-21 01:19 AM

Thank you.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-02-21 10:54 AM

beautiful...wow, now I'm off to the next one...

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

4 posted 2007-02-21 11:35 AM

I am with you!!!! Night and day on this one....If only I could ask him these questions face to face!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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