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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
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Chester, England

0 posted 2007-02-21 12:48 PM



post mortem

Going through the veil -
Once life’s journey is a tale
Did your faith prevail


Ivor G Davies

The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-02-21 10:56 AM


faith...hmmm, sure does make me think
enjoyed

ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
Posts 739
Chester, England
2 posted 2007-02-21 06:48 PM


Lee,

On another site the meaning seemed to get lost due to a debate on my right to rhyme in this style of poetry!  LOL

Thanks for looking at this....

Ivor

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