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ivordavies
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since 2007-01-10
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Chester, England

0 posted 2007-02-21 12:40 PM





eternity beckons

body discarded
spirit struggling upwards -
too late to grow wings


Ivor G Davies



The moment created this second, is a  moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.

© Copyright 2007 Ivor G Davies - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2007-02-21 10:57 AM


anothe heavy weight...fantastic visual
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2007-02-21 11:22 AM


A divine senryu!

Love & Eternal Light,
Linda

ivordavies
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3 posted 2007-02-21 06:41 PM


Lee, Linda,

Thank you for your kind responses...

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