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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2007-02-20 01:20 PM


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A heavy sadness
Hangs over the water
While in the distance alone
A pheasant calls

School has been out
For quite some time
So no one should pretend
He or she wouldn’t know

Being too good
For any imagined god or love
Spending money getting laid
As alternatives fulfilled
Our glorious hours

Now all those years
Will go as well
On book shelves
Along silent corridors

Akin the darkened catacombs
Of Rome


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014

1 posted 2007-02-20 01:58 PM


I read this several times and still wonder if I've deciphered the meaning . . .

we are going the way of Rome?

at any rate, it's a great read that gives one pause!

R

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
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Dark side of the Moon.
2 posted 2007-02-20 03:11 PM


Yes, John.... The obligation of nobility.
             Exactly.... Excellent.


           MoonShadow
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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-02-20 03:17 PM


A heavy sadness
Hangs over the water
While in the distance alone
A pheasant calls

a lone pheasant meaning something is becomeing obsolete

School has been out
For quite some time
So no one should pretend
He or she wouldn’t know

mankind is not at all moving forward
intellectually and all the way around

Being too good
For any imagined god or love
Spending money getting laid
As alternatives fulfilled
Our glorious hours

actaully waisting our time, becoming lazy individualists

Now all those years
Will go as well
On book shelves
Along silent corridors

just like the great shelves of anchient Alexandria

Akin the darkened catacombs
Of Rome

the underground graves of Rome call up to us...and we're deaf

amazing write

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
4 posted 2007-02-22 09:19 PM


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Thank you,

I wanted to leave an ambivalence in this
in that the real regardless sadness
may lie in, whatever, the party
being eventually over . . .

Thanks again

John

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