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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2007-02-20 11:26 AM


And I am still not sure about this one...HMMMM


understand I stand alone
if I can't stand with you
understand I stand alone
and fade into the black
and out of the blue
understand I stand alone
if your solace I can't be
understand I stand alone
if a protector you can't be
understand I stand alone
until you and I are free


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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-02-20 01:12 PM


its not so bad at all standing alone, especially when there is so much unhappiness being together...

good one

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-02-23 05:46 AM


yes, I hear you on this one... nicely penned RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Janette
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3 posted 2007-02-23 08:07 AM


"and fade into the black
and out of the blue"

There is an interesting hue to this piece and a strong message.  

Enjoyed.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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