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*Sweet Dreams*
New Member

since 2007-02-20

Posts 9
NSW,Australia

0 posted 2007-02-20 07:12 AM

I'm so afraid I love you,
I can't be alone with you,
But I have to be with you,
Just to feel alive.

I lay here out of faith,
Confused to what is real,
I feel you breathing for me.
I have everything for you,
I'm so afraid I love you.

The dark holds so many surprises for me,
You hold me under.
Why Me ?

Now let go of me love,
I wish you all the worst for the future,
I'm so afraid I love you.

I hope you laugh at all the times I cried for you,
I hope you still see me face to facade.

I'm so afraid I love you,
I can't be alone with you,
But I need to be with you,
Just to feel alive.

And even now,
I don't know why.
But I would love to see you cry,
For me.

But I feel you breathe for me,
And I cannot waste my tears.
Not for you.

But my revelations come quick and fast,
And I have never really felt anything.

Just know,
That I've looked down on you
Trying to love you.
But I couldn't feel anything.
So just smile back.

I'm so afraid I love you,
I can't be alone with you,
But I need to be with you,
Just to feel alive.
~S-D ™

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-02-20 07:16 AM

Hi there! Welcome to Passions!

I sure can relate to that last verse, really the whole poem but that last verse hit home

will be looking for more of your work!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2007-02-21 10:39 AM

Welcome to PIP
this was a heartfelt write...profoundly the ache is felt
poetry is expression, ache, happiness, experience, compassion, fears, success, nature, spiritual, love for God, life and fellow man, it is emotions running strong, words floating in the mind from the heart.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2007-02-21 10:53 AM

SweetDreams~
Welcome to our friendly poetic circle~

Please enjoy your time here~

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2007-02-21 06:14 PM

SweetDreams.... welcome to our blue pages, your words are very heartfelt... I hope to read more of your work... welcome

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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