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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2007-02-20 01:26 AM


Blood Boil


I am cold
bones brittle
deep freeze under the skin

can you warm me
with your words and thought

can you thaw the chill
and make my blood boil?

...

aziza

© Copyright 2007 Alison - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-02-20 01:55 AM


lovely!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2007-02-20 07:14 AM


excellent series!
MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
3 posted 2007-02-20 07:20 AM


Milady Aziza... So short and sweet. Sometimes more difficult and creative. Your muse is working overtime with you and we are simply feasting. Write on, Milady, more, please.

               MoonShadow
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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
4 posted 2007-02-20 07:28 AM


ms az, cool image of heatred's handywork..

am glad I came by


Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2007-02-20 08:51 AM


Very lovely series~much enjoyed.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

6 posted 2007-02-20 09:30 AM


marvelous!!!
Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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USA
7 posted 2007-02-20 11:15 AM


I know someone who could.....it's true!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

The Lady
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8 posted 2007-02-20 06:32 PM




ah ha! beautiful ending
to this series!

well done aziza...


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