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dark side of the moon |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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and if ever you visit the dark side of the moon roses will grow in your hand any color you like yes even lilac in the shadow of the moon you shall find words like none you have ever heard or seen words like breathe breathe care if ever you visit the dark side of the moon you shall find a night knight leaning into the swelling light moonbeams darting in and out his beard sweet lips parted to taste purple cordial dreaming of a maiden and the lilac he can smell but cannot reach |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
:: Smiles -- there are no words to convey how much I love this :: |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Lady Kate I want to visit the dark side of the moon!! just lovely! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Lady Kate, you know I adore this one! *hugs*...jo |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Kate, you brighten the dark side of the moon with brilliant imagery. You captivate with enigmatic intrigue that is simply magic. A most beautiful write that is amazing on many levels. "dreaming of a maiden and the lilac he can smell but cannot reach" MoonShadow . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms katie...nice to watch your dance here |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
remarkable |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Sounds like a place I would like to visit. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I love your imagination. Always so vivid you think it is true. martyjo |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
This is very good, almost an extension it seems to me from Keat's La Belle Dame Sans Merci. With your permission I would like to include this in my Word File of poems by others. If yes, what name shall I attach to it? Again very good. John |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
wow! this is wonderful! stimulated deep thoughts! Thanks! Robert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed...I read this earlier...how colorful this is! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
now that's imagination! ...well done, thoroughly enjoyed... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much aziza Roniece my friend it is truly a lovely place and there is music thank you jo hugs to you thank you MoonShadow but the magic truly lies on the dark side of the moon Stranger it’s good to see you I’ve missed your words Katie thank you very much LeeJ if ever you have the chance go SmartChick you will love it thank you martyjo it nearly is true… her hair is long and her eyes are wild but I don’t know about the foot thing yes, of course John… thank you my name is Kate thank you very much Robert Dixie… thank you so much |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
leaning into the swelling light moonbeams darting in and out his beard sweet lips parted to taste purple cordial dreaming of a maiden and the lilac he can smell ~*~ Oh.... my.... I never realized heaven was so close to the dark side of the moon. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I think they may be the same Karilea let me look at the map again... thank you  |
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