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Rod
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0 posted 2007-02-19 12:35 PM


Spring is for the spirit that is young and wild and free
Summer is the time for being all you want to be;
Autumn is a moment for reflecting on the past;
To gather strength in readiness for winter’s icy blast.

So easy is the living when the sun is warm and bright
How vivid is its contrast with the chill of winter’s night!
When golden amber turns into the frosty white of dawn,
And you walk the hard road, haunted by the wicked winter’s scorn...

Remember whence your courage and your character were found…
‘Twas surely not in Autumn’s gold nor springtime’s fertile ground.
Nor summer’s blissful soft embrace, sweet as her kiss may be…
Oh no! it was another steeped in cold adversity.

Like an iceberg in the ocean, we have hidden strengths below,
That are formed in life’s cold waters from our tears of melting snow.
So the heart that beats within you, as it pulses, like a  star
Must not forget those winters... for they made you what you are.




The greatest thing you can do for another is not just to share your own riches...but to reveal to him his own.

© Copyright 2007 Rod Walford - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2007-02-19 06:11 PM


I especially like this line:

"Like an iceberg in the ocean, we have hidden strengths below,
That are formed in life’s cold waters from our tears of melting snow."

A very special poem for a special lady.

Well done, Rod!

icequeen
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2 posted 2007-02-19 07:49 PM


You cannot know how touched I am by this. I am speechless, really......... it is beautiful and I thank you so much for posting it. Yes, it has been a hard winter so far, but I can only gain from it. Again, thank you. You are very sweet. This means so much to me.

Caroline

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3 posted 2007-02-19 08:54 PM



I would have said what serenity posted,
but she beat me to it!

Wonderful write, Rod.  Thank you!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2007-02-19 09:21 PM


wonderful Rod !!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

SmartChick
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5 posted 2007-02-19 11:56 PM


Awwww, this is just so beautiful. And, for a very special lady.
passing shadows
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6 posted 2007-02-20 07:20 AM


a beautiful poem for a beautiful lady
LeeJ
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7 posted 2007-02-20 10:58 AM


your writing is amazing, and I'm certain she will hold this close forever...
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