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wordwizard
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on the way to next world

0 posted 2007-02-18 04:50 PM


There was she
another came along
swept hubby off his feet
man wanted legal representation
he got a lover instead.

She was in love
created bad family image
neighbourhood bully
younger love took her
she would fight for
her kids
to protect her turf
children would pick up
the way of tricks
less the treats
as long as they didn't get caught
so they wouldn't be dependent
slapped in indignant ways

There she was
replaced by another
who swept hubby off his feet
she'd see blind dates
they would shirk her
wanted the wholesome kind
difficult to find
in worlds of accused
but he was falsely bruised..
cause of false charges
he didn't want to relate
wanted escape.

She found him
mean represented him
found the other lady
with the younger drug beat
and fell in love
there was something
outside the blind thing
she had to find something
like he treated his girls
as princesses
he fought off his accused past
loved by community spirits

One wonders how he settled
with one before the other
the first
dealt with an addictive nature
before he'd find a tight ass
legal kind
who opened up
she was bruised too
hurt by a previous lover
who would marry two days
after the I love you..

But the second lady
helped the man
get his justice over
the first was violent
allied to neighborhood bully
community hated their control

what a world of
who loves whom
who cheats whom
get over it
open yourself to the one
the one that comes along
one who is not alone
asks for help
and offers their heart..
after Valentines day.


[This message has been edited by wordwizard (02-19-2007 07:47 PM).]

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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
1 posted 2007-02-19 11:42 PM


influenced by another film?


Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
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2 posted 2007-02-21 02:41 PM


I need to read this one again it really took me in...take care...JulieAnn

~~~kingsangel~~~

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